Riveting!

"This story was not at all what I expected it to be. Extremely dark and entertaining. Some points, even I almost couldn't get through. Which is great cause that means the writer did an amazing job with details. I personally love dark stories and this was def a top contender of a thriller. At first I was so confused at the start of the story cause it was from a male perspective and I wondered where Elaine POV was. But as I read on, it became clear how the story was working out to be. I think if each character POV had their own chapter it would make it less confusing when the scenes changed. I've noticed incomplete spelling and pronoun usage (like his, instead of her). I would've also loved to know if Tommy was able to get out alive. Amazing job❤️, I almost want to suggest therapy for you. 🤣"