The Song of Avidas

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Summary

Rowan, a young mapmaker, sails west to the forgotten land of Avidas, where the sky is torn and memories leak into rivers and forests. Guided by the exile Aurelius, river-listener Liora, and stern regent Serane, he discovers that Avidas is broken because three magical crowns once shattered and ripped the sky open. Using his map, living ink, and the land’s own memories, Rowan “redraws” Avidas—turning dams of buried guilt into shared paths of remembrance. The sky’s wound narrows into a scar, the people begin to remember safely, and Rowan leaves with a shard of the Crown of Names, carrying the new “Song of Avidas” to the wider world.

Status
Complete
Chapters
7
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 – The Edge of the Map

In every tavern of the old continent, there was a different way to pronounce the name Avidas. Some dragged out the vowels like a hymn; others spat it like a curse. Maps showed it as a pale smear beyond the known borders, where the cartographers simply wrote: Here be nothing.

Rowan Merrick had grown up tracing that nothing with ink-stained fingers.

He was seventeen when the mapmaker died.

The bell above the shop door still chimed as if the old man might shuffle out from the back room, muttering about dust and careless elbows. But the ink was dry on the final map they had drawn together, a map that was more dream than geography. It showed rivers no one had crossed, mountains no one had named—and, in the far western blank, a small, stubborn word in Rowan’s neat script: Avidas.

The city outside was like any other in the eastern kingdoms: slate roofs dripping rain, stone streets slick with mud, church spires cutting up the sky. Bells tolled vespers; pigeons shuffled and cooed under the eaves. It was a world of merchants, small coins, and smaller chances. Yet somewhere past the storm-grey sea, beyond the border of the known, there was Avidas.

Rowan didn’t know if it was real. He only knew he couldn’t stay here now that the old man’s chair sat empty.

He rolled up the last unfinished map and bound it with a strip of leather worn soft by years of use. When he lifted it, a folded sheet slipped from the table—parchment yellowed at the edges, the ink a faded rust. It was not his handwriting.

He recognized it anyway.

His master, Oswin Hart, had written in a careful hand rarely used on orders or city plans. The note was short.

Rowan,

When I am gone, follow the line we never dared to draw.

The world is not finished where ink runs out.

—O.

Beneath the signature, there was a sketch—not of a coastline or a mountain range, but of a symbol: an eight-pointed star encircled by three tiny crowns.

Rowan traced it with his thumb. He’d seen that mark once before, in a book of banned histories that the city guard had confiscated. It had been called the Emblem of Avidas, the last banner flown in the War of Shattered Crowns before the western kingdoms fell silent and the sea swallowed their names.

“Avidas,” he whispered, tasting the word as if it might open like a door.

There were practical reasons not to go. He had enough coin for perhaps a week’s lodging. He had no patron, no appointment, no invitation from kings or councils. The western sea was treacherous; the sailors in the harbor spat salt and superstition whenever he asked about it. Ships disappear there, they said. The currents are wrong. The stars don’t behave.

Still, every road in the city now led only to Oswin’s empty chair.

That evening, as the rain thickened into a curtain and lanterns glowed amber in the fog, Rowan locked the map shop for the last time. He left the key with the landlord, who shrugged and said something about a cousin wanting the space for a spice stall.

Rowan stepped into the street with his travel pack on his back and Oswin’s final map strapped to its side. The air smelled of damp stone and wood smoke. Somewhere a fiddler played a mournful tune, and for a heartbeat Rowan nearly turned back.

Then he lifted his collar against the rain and walked toward the harbor.


The harbor district was a place of shouted bargains and broken promises. Ships from the southern wine coast and the iron isles hugged the safer eastern routes. Their sails were stained with tar and sun, their masts carved with charms against ordinary storms.

Rowan walked past them, toward the outer docks where the sea grew darker and the air tasted colder. Half-rotten pylons leaned into the water like old men staring down at their own reflections. The cries of gulls dimmed; the roar of waves grew.

He found the ship he was looking for almost by accident: a lean, grey-hulled barque with no name on her prow, only that same eight-pointed star carved just above the waterline.

A man stood at the gangplank, coat too fine for any common sailor, hat pulled low against the rain. His hair was the pale gold of straw left in a field and his eyes, when he glanced at Rowan, were vivid green, sharp as cut glass.

“You look lost,” the man said in a mild, cultured voice that didn’t belong to the docks at all.

“I’m looking for passage west,” Rowan replied, trying to keep his voice steady. “Beyond the trade routes.”

“You and no one else.” The man’s mouth quirked. “The west is unfashionable this season. Full of old ghosts, empty thrones—so they say.”

Rowan swallowed. “Is that your ship?”

“It is for the moment.” The man tilted his head, studying him. “Name?”

“Rowan Merrick. I’m a mapmaker.” He hesitated, then added, “I seek Avidas.”

Something flickered in the man’s eyes—not mockery, but recognition, as if Rowan had just spoken a shared secret.

“I am Aurelius Vale,” he said. “Once of Avidas.”

Rowan’s heart hammered so loudly he was sure the man could hear it. “Then it’s real. It exists.”

“More or less.” Aurelius’s gaze slid past him to the rain-smudged city. “Though I sometimes wish it did not. Tell me, Rowan Merrick, why would a boy who knows the safety of streets and parchment risk his life for a rumor?”

Rowan thought of Oswin’s empty chair and the ink that stopped at the edge of ignorance. He thought of the phrase that had haunted him since childhood: Here be nothing.

“Because maps are lies if we let them be,” he said. “Because someone has to draw the rest of the world.”

Aurelius stared for a long moment. Then he laughed softly, not unkindly.

“Very well, cartographer. Bring your lies and we will see how they fare against my homeland’s truths. Passage is not cheap.”

Rowan unfastened the small leather satchel at his belt and handed over every coin he had without counting. Aurelius weighed it in his hand, shrugged, and tucked it away.

“Welcome aboard,” he said. “We sail with the turning of the tide.”


Night deepened as the ship slipped from the harbor, slipping past the last of the familiar beacon lights. The city fell away like a dream. The sea around them was an undulating sheet of black velvet, the sky above pricked with cold stars.

Rowan stood at the stern, clutching the rail tight enough that his knuckles ached. Wind stung his face; salt dampened his hair. The eastern coast dwindled to a smudge, then vanished altogether.

Aurelius appeared at his side, cloak snapping in the wind. For a time they watched the wake of the ship curl and disappear behind them.

“Tell me, Rowan,” Aurelius said quietly, “on your maps, how is Avidas drawn?”

Rowan unrolled Oswin’s final chart with careful fingers, holding it flat against the wind. The western margin showed only a suggestion: a jagged line like a sleeping dragon’s spine, a river spilling inland, a single inked word.

“A guess,” Rowan admitted. “A dream.”

Aurelius traced the coastline with a gloved hand. “You are not entirely wrong,” he murmured. “Avidas is like that. Half-remembered, half-invented. We were always fond of making ourselves seem larger than we were.”

“You left,” Rowan said. “Why?”

Aurelius’s jaw tightened. “Because the land I loved forgot itself. Because in Avidas, memories can be stolen like jewels, and the crowns that once held us together shattered on the same day the sky did.”

“The sky?”

“You will see.” Aurelius folded the map with a care that surprised Rowan and handed it back. “Understand this, cartographer: Avidas is not like your eastern kingdoms. Our rivers run with old magic and older grudges. Our cities are built on promises that have not all been kept. When we reach it, your ink will run wilder than you expect.”

Rowan swallowed. “Are we the only ones on board?”

“For now.” Aurelius’s gaze flicked toward the shadowed deck. “Though you may hear other footsteps at night. The sea has its own passengers.”

That was not comforting, but Rowan found that his fear had taken on an odd, almost pleasant edge—the way standing at the top of a tower did, when looking down made his stomach swoop with something like delight.

“How long until we see it?” he asked.

Aurelius looked west, where the stars seemed to thin as if something vast and unseen darkened the horizon. The wind shifted; the air grew colder.

“By dawn,” he said softly, “you will see the first light of Avidas. And with it, the first crack in your old maps.”

Rowan tightened his grip on the rail, feeling the ship surge beneath him like a living creature. He thought of Oswin’s note, of the star encircled by three crowns, of the words: Follow the line we never dared to draw.

Behind him, the world he knew was already gone. Ahead, the blank waited.

And somewhere in that blank, under a fractured sky and upon a land that half the world had chosen to forget, Avidas waited too.