great potential

"I just finished your book and absolutely loved it! Your writing style is fantastic, the pacing is so smooth that I couldn’t put it down and read it in one sitting. The dialogue is sharp, full of tension and wit, and you have this great ability to build whole scenes through conversation. However, when they fell for each other, the storytelling felt a bit concise. Honestly, I would've loved to see that part drawn out a little more. I also really enjoyed how well-developed each character feels. Eliz comes across as such a responsible and compelling father—and quite charming. And Frances’s adoration for children is just so endearing. Can’t wait to read more from you and see what you publish next!"