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Goddess in the making

"Compelling! I wish there was a little more detail on the sins’ physical features, like hair color/length, etc. Just to make it a little easier to picture them. But I love the story! Nyx is my girl!"

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Amazing Storytelling

"Your writing style is captivating and immersive. The characters feel real, and every chapter keeps readers curious and excited for what happens next."

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Like it very much

"Somehow you manage to catch attension, with this chaotic cramped existence. Feels so real and unapologetic. Cant wait to see this unfold"

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Amazing work

"This story is beautiful so far. Relatable for anyone who has imposter syndrome or PTSD. I adore the concepts and I am having trouble figuring out what is next which has me very excited. I love the hints of location. I am from that area so you have hit close to home. Please keep writing. "

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