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The Gate Above the Clouds

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Summary

High above a quiet European mountain village, an ancient gate is waking. Every time the wind howls down from the White Peak, Liora hears a low, metallic hum—and sees a crack of blue light split the clouds. The elders insist it’s only the storm. The Order of the Threshold knows better: twenty years ago, the Gate nearly tore the world apart, and Liora’s mother vanished trying to help seal it. When the hum becomes a song only she can hear, Liora is pulled into a climb she’s been warned about her whole life. With a haunted father, a duty-driven knight, a stubborn ward-mender and stone Guardians bound to the mountain, she must face the Gate itself—an ancient bridge between worlds that doesn’t understand words like mercy or safety. To save her village (and possibly reality), Liora has to decide whether to become the next “anchor” in a brutal magical Seal… or risk rewriting the rules of the Gate and turning a one-way prison into a dangerous, fragile bridge. Mountains, snow, mysterious runes, family secrets, and a mother’s voice trapped in light—this is a fantasy about doors, choices, and how far we’ll go to protect the people we love.

Status
Complete
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 – The Village Beneath the White Peak

By late autumn, when the wind came down from the White Peak like a knife, the villagers of Hohenfels lit their stoves earlier and spoke more softly. It was not the cold they feared. It was the sound that sometimes came with it.

A deep, metallic hum, like a hundred church bells pressed into one note.

Liora heard it first that year while she was hanging washed linens on the line behind her family’s stone cottage. Mist coiled between the roofs, and the mountain loomed above the village like a sleeping titan, its upper half swallowed by clouds. Liora had grown up under that shadow, the only child of the village herbalist, and the mountain was as familiar to her as the creak of the old wooden stairs at home.

Which was why she noticed when something changed.

The air shivered. The metal pegs in the laundry line trembled. Then came the sound—low, resonant, almost too soft to call a sound. It pushed against her bones rather than her ears.

She dropped the damp sheet she was pinning and looked up at the white summit. For a moment, the clouds parted. A faint, vertical line of light flashed near the highest ridge, like a crack in the sky itself, then vanished.

“Did you see that?” she whispered to no one.

The sheet slipped into the mud unnoticed as she stared. Her heart beat too quickly, her breath puffing into the chill air.

“Liora?” Her father’s voice came from the back door. “You’re letting the wind steal our linens again.”

She startled. “Sorry, Papa!” She scrambled to pick up the sheet, now streaked with brown, and forced herself to look away from the mountain.

Her father, Herr Ansel, stood in the doorway with a shawl around his shoulders and ink on his fingers from the ledger he kept for his herb trade. His gray hair was pulled back in a simple ribbon, and his eyes, the same icy blue as his daughter’s, narrowed as he followed her earlier gaze.

“Staring at the peak again,” he muttered. “One would think the mountain owes you money.”

“Did you hear it?” Liora asked. “The hum. And there was a light, like a crack up near the ridge. It was—”

He stiffened. For a heartbeat, fear crossed his face so quickly she almost missed it.

“No,” he said too quickly. “The wind plays tricks. Finish the laundry before it rains.”

He turned back into the house, leaving the door half open.

Liora stared at the doorway, frowning. Her father had never been good at lying. Not to her.

Inside, the rumors she’d heard for years flared up in her mind. The children of Hohenfels whispered them in the schoolyard. The old men muttered them over beer at the inn. The Gate Above the Clouds. The Portal of the Old Kings. The Door of Judgment.

The stories changed, but one thing didn’t: somewhere near the top of the White Peak, hidden behind mist and perilous cliffs, there was a gate that did not belong to this world at all.

She finished hanging the laundry, but her thoughts were no longer on the chores. When she finally stepped back inside, she found her father at the table, pretending to read his ledger but not turning the pages.

“Papa,” she said slowly, “you’ve been up there, haven’t you?”

The inked fingers tightened on the book. “Liora…”

“Everyone says only the old hunters used to climb that high. But you were a hunter before Mama died.” She swallowed the ache that always followed that word. “You know more than you say.”

Ansel sighed, the sound full of years. “Some doors, child, are better left closed.”

“And if they open by themselves?” she shot back.

He hesitated. The silence pressed between them like a third presence.

“At market today,” Liora continued, “there was talk. A shepherd from the next valley—his flock vanished overnight. No tracks in the snow, only… scorch marks. And last week, Frau Brunn’s boy had a nightmare so vivid he woke with frost on his eyelashes.” Liora’s voice dropped. “He said he dreamt of a gate of stone and iron and blue light.”

Her father shut the ledger with a soft thud. “I forbid you to go higher than the pine line,” he said. “The old path is closed. The mountain is not… dormant as it once was. I feel it in my bones.”

“That’s just rheumatism,” she muttered.

He gave her a look, but it was tired more than angry. “I’m serious, Liora.”

“So am I. If something is happening up there, we can’t just pretend it isn’t. What if the stories are true? What if the Gate is opening?” She met his eyes. “What if it’s dangerous?”

“Then it is not our danger to face,” he said. “The kings of old built that gate. Let their ghosts worry about it.”

“Ghosts don’t stop hums you can feel in your teeth.”

He almost smiled despite himself. “You always were impossible.”

“And curious.”

“And that will be the death of you,” he said quietly.

The candles flickered as another faint tremor passed through the house. For a moment, they both heard it: the hum, distant but clearer now, like a chord from a vast organ somewhere high above.

They stared at each other.

“Papa,” Liora whispered. “That was not the wind.”

His face went pale. He stood abruptly, the chair scraping on the floorboards. “We will speak no more of this tonight. Bolt the shutters. And if anyone comes asking about strange sounds or lights, you tell them nothing. Do you understand? Nothing.”

“Who would come asking?” she murmured.

As if in answer, there was a firm knock at the front door.

They both jumped.

Ansel shot her a sharp look: stay. Then he walked to the door and opened it.

On the doorstep stood a man wrapped in a dark cloak beaded with cold mist. He was tall, with hair the color of snow and a face lined not with age but with exposure to harsh winds. A sword hilt peeked from beneath his cloak, and around his neck gleamed a sigil Liora did not recognize: a stylized mountain with a vertical line through its heart.

“Good evening, Herr Ansel,” the stranger said, voice smooth but edged. “I seek information about the White Peak. I am told you once climbed higher than any man in this village.”

Liora’s breath caught. Her father blocked the doorway with his body, as if shielding the stranger from seeing inside.

“You’ve been misinformed,” Ansel said flatly. “I am a simple herbalist now. The mountain and I have nothing more to say to one another.”

The stranger smiled without warmth. “The Gate above the clouds is waking. You felt the hum. You saw the light. We all did.” His pale eyes slid past Ansel’s shoulder and met Liora’s.

For a heartbeat, she felt as if she were standing on a precipice.

“My name is Caelan,” he said. “I serve the Order of the Threshold. The Gate is no longer merely the concern of kings long dead. It concerns all of us. And I think your daughter is right.”

Liora blinked. She hadn’t realized he’d heard her earlier argument.

Caelan inclined his head to her. “If the Gate is opening,” he said softly, “then someone will have to climb.”

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