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A Beautifully Told Tale Of Total Surrender

"Kelly, All of your work on this story gave us something special: a look into a young woman abandoning her self-made trappings of ego and pride. She was left to travel through degradation, shame, and intimate exposure to her total submission. All to satisfy a base primal need dripping between her legs. I imagine this is where, deep down, you want to be."

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Hot story

"Liked the tension building not sure about the Sarah character interaction seems a bit odd that she would comment on what was happening "

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MADE ME HRNY

"AMAZING "

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Intense

"This was an AMAZING read. LOVE their dynamic. Love the characters. Love that it's grounded. That made this feel real and very very exciting. 10 out of 5 stars! "

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Roommate in Charge

"I loved the strong male character Ethan and the way Mira melted into submission. I also loved the fact that the characters weren't just about the kink of dom/sub and truly had deep feelings for each other. "

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Roommate in charge

"This was an interesting read. I enjoyed a romantic story without the usual elements. It was HOT!"

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Review

"Enjoyed the book. I wish there had been some intimacy between both of them "

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Omg

"This book has me shaking. "

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Good writing

"Quite fast pace, good writing without the over explain and exaggeration of the characters."

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WOW

"Sizzling 🥵🌶️🔥 Very enjoyable storie."

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It was Perfect

"The chemistry between them is something I really liked, I wish I could live such thing in my life "

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🔥🌶🌶

"Loving the control and spice 😍 "

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about the story

"it was hot and perfect "

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Too good

"Wohh so good the story was engaging ahhh their chemistry was sooo goood it felt reall though and the thought of how we have different desires in our life and it's bad not to have it the story wasss tooo good enjoyed it :) And i would definitely read other story of yours "

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Fabulous

"Great storyline, well written, great characters, good character growth. Excellent. "

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Roommate in charge

"I loved reading each chapter it was such a great book "

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Well written

"Well written interesting to read. Recommended"

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Excellent story

"Another amazing story from my favorite author. So beautifully done, so perfectly discribed. Just excellent and full of love. Thank you Kelly "

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Simple yet well written

"The story is direct, goes right to the point and tells exactly what it wants to tell. It is incredibly well written and built in a way that keeps you attached to the screen. I wish more writers had this honesty. "

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Roommate in charge

"I loved this book."

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