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Brat in Panties

"I love the characters....I love the relationship that has grown between Ivan and Eli so much! Ivan cracks me up. Even though he acts so self-assured, it's also obvious that he's sensitive as well. Although it seemed forced, I also love that Eli has come to the realization that he feels more for Ivan than he ever felt for past heterosexual relationships. And that it's okay not to label it. "

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LOVE!

"Amazing story! I’m always so exited for updates and they always deliver. Thank you so much for your creativity. Please keep it up.🤩 *waits patiently for more*"

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686

"Noooo I'm not ready for this story to stop for me. Its been my whole week. "

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You should read this...

"I did not realize this book was still going when I first picked it up. I felt like this story just left me wanting more, but that makes since to me now, there is more to come. I get the feeling that this author is still going and they have a thought out plan. This author is very creative and I feel like there is a solid tie from this book to Ox and Kitty. I like how this author weaves a tale and builds the characters. I think this author is worth reading and I will stick around to see how this all plays out. If you need some hot male male action with lots of heart and passion, this is it. It is worth the time."

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Awesome!

"The author creates an awesome slow-burn romance between the two characters, along with fun, humorous banter between the leads. "

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I’m obsessed

"I keep counting down to Sunday for the next updates and will definitely reread when it is completed, just for the pleasure of experiencing it all in one go. 10/10 recommend!!!"

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"Amazing story. Can't get enough, Rosie 😘"

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I love this dynamic!

"Ivan is so charming and dominant, Eli is soooo stubborn and getting weaker"

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Brat in Panties

"Love, takes many forms in this rendition. Time, patience, honesty, sex appeal, non judgment. These characters are very complex and possess family loyalty. The mystery in life's past is heartbreaking, the journey forward is rewarding."

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Will we see vibrating panties 😝

"I'm enjoying this story. The texts with emojis are cute to watch play out. I love the reluctance and controlling nature. As I said in my title I really hope there's some cheeky games involving vibrating panties, and I'm excited to see the first punishment come to a head! I also loved your other story! "

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Good story about control and surrender

"I’ve read it in one go. So far, is addictive. He doesn’t know for now how to surrender to is sugar daddy, but he does anyway. Can’t wait to read de rest!!"

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