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Pure attraction

"This story !makes me so emotional I really cried because I can relate 98% to what happened to paradice it's like someone wrote !y life down the differences are he was older and he never came back how I wish I am paradice right now ,nice book author hands off "

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Pure attraction

"This story !makes me so emotional I really cried because I can relate 98% to what happened to paradice it's like someone wrote !y life down the differences are he was older and he never came back how I wish I am paradice right now ,nice book author hands off "

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Pure attraction

"This story !makes me so emotional I really cried because I can relate 98% to what happened to paradice it's like someone wrote !y life down the differences are he was older and he never came back how I wish I am paradice right now ,nice book author hands off "

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Nice

"Well written"

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Pure Attraction

"OMG So friggen amazing. Great plot line and the greatest love story ive read in a while. Keep writing more stories please. You are AMAZING"

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Pure Attraction

"Very Good.Did not like the ending though because it was pretty short.But THANK YOU! For writing this story I know it probably took a while or so.Keep trying and so your best."

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Pure Attraction

"I liked the honestly and bluntness of the characters actions, words, thoughts, and emotions. I feel like the Happy Ending disappointed me. I’m going through possibly loosing my first love and it’s the scariest thing. I love the realness. I’m not sure if this writing was translated or not but I did find myself having to reword some of the sentences. Though the story itself was amazing. 9/10i"

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Nice story

"Nice story with a beautiful plot "

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Beautiful

"This story was so well written!!! I've read good stories and this is definitely in my top 10. I did notice few grammar errors in the making but we all have made those while writing. This novel is so heart-warming and I would read it again in a heartbeat. Pure Attraction defines what love is and what it means to many different people in this world and I think that is super special. Everyone has rough patches in love at some point and this book has it all. The crush, the butterflies, the rapid heartbeats, the love, the pain, and in the end, the satisfaction of finding your true love. This book is truly inspiring and I do recommend it to everyone. We need more stories like Pure Attraction."

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Pure attraction

"Ended up being not to bad. I personally dislike endings like this. Hopefully there is a part 2!"

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Pure attraction

"This was a beautiful story! It's addicting to read, and i encourage you to continue writing stories! -J.M. "

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Perfect story

"I like the caring nature of paradice and dislike nothing I recommend this to my friends I rated because I like "

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Yes I did. it has good ending

"This story was amazing, I've never read something so good so great, and I'm not a guy too emotional but when I was reading the end of it, tears came out the fact that you and AUSTIN LAWSON ended up together and what he told you on the letter. Everything was perfect and the plot was quite intriguing. thanks for shared this story. "

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Pure Attraction

"This was a really good book and the story of it all was amazing. I chose these ratings because I have never read such a good book in the longest time and this is coming from someone who does not to read."

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Pure Attraction

"No words-- absolutely amazing, I was so into this novel that I was disappointed it ended. Will there be a sequel, well I hope there will-- great job Pheobe ng x"

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Perfect love story

"Just the best thing I came across.. thanks for making me feel that true love exists.. well after reading this I wanna be in love with someone who will stick with me till the end.. I hope to have a love story like Paradice and Austin.. sending love and support for the author.. thanks again for this wonderful love story.. I truly loved it ❤️❤️❤️"

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Pure Attraction

"This is story got that real teenager feels. I myself am a teen and I could actually relate to Paradice's story. I am quite surprised that she was introduced as a fifteen year-old girl. Most of the Teen Fictions I've encountered have ages ranging from 16-19. Usually, I get cringey when I read stories with this age range. But with this one, I actually thought it was cute. Honestly, I'm not a sappy romantic and Paradice's personality when it comes to love is something new for me and I actually liked it. Well, to Ms. Author, I really like your work. As an aspiring author, I find ideas on other people's works and yours is one that I would need reference to when it comes to humor. Though there may be some needed editing on the grammatical errors, I still love how you play with your words. Also, the P.O.V. that you used is perfect for the personality of the main character. I am looking forward to reading more of your stories. To all fellow readers, if you're a teen and dealing with a huge crush right now, I recommend this book highly 'cause you might see yourself in it. I know y'all would love this. God Bless"

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Sweet Story

"The story is a beautiful telling of a young couple experiencing their first love and hardships. I felt pulled to the story, as my experience with love is very similar (and we're happily married now), and I loved the ending. The pace of the book is good, and I enjoyed getting to know the characters. The grammar does need some attention, but it's nothing that can't be fixed! Overall, I enjoyed this story!"

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Pure Attraction

"I have now read several romance novels on Inkitt. You just know they are going to get together at some point and live happily in the end. From my own experience, I was 14 and I dropped a brother who was my age from his young brother who was only 11 at the time. Yeah, his brother was angry with me He was wise beyond his years. He was my first love and we even planned to get married. Unfortunately, my parents didn’t agree with this relationship and he soon had to move away to another state but I had his number so I thought I could reach out to him. Conveniently my own brother said he lost the number so I waited for my love to call me. Time moved on and no phone call came. I turned 16 and behold he showed up at my house. I was just getting out of bed when my brother told me he was here in our dining room. Excited I got out of bed and passed out and hit my head on the radio in my room. My mom and brother found me. By this time, I was aware again but boy did I have a headache. I quickly dressed and made it to my long-lost love and hugged him for dear life as he asked me if we were still boyfriend and girlfriend. I hugged him tighter and told him yes. He was now taller than me and so striking and his voice was mature. We talked for a while and he gave me his number again. But it wasn’t meant to be. My brother again claimed he lost the number and I found out years later my beloved’s brother just didn’t want me to be in contact with him and neither did my parents so our relationship was cut off by both parties according to my brother. I can really identify with Paradise. The story was very believable to me. The author had all these wonderful twists and turns that kept me reading and it looked like the end but I was glad they finally got together. I would recommend this book to others who also had a first love."

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