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Heartwarming writing with excellent world-building

"Despite only being up to chapter 4 so far I am thoroughly enjoying reading and feel hooked. The writing feels professional, with excellent world building and wonderful dialogue. I already find myself wanting to see more of the budding relationship between Lia and Pat, and intrigued by the characters backgrounds. I hope you continue to write, I can see this has excellent foundations so be a brilliant book! "

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