What is your opinion?
Slow start, strong hook.
"The story starts slow, but in the best way. It lets you settle into the characters, the town, and the atmosphere before the slowburn really kicks in. Once the tension starts building, it becomes impossible to stop reading. I’m fully invested now and can’t wait for the next chapter!!"
Great Start!
"I really enjoyed the beginning of this novel! The way the story grounds the characters right away makes it easy to connect with them, especially Chloé, her sorrow feels real and poignant. I loved how the town and its wintery vibe are brought to life, and the way snowboarding is woven into her healing adds a unique, heartfelt touch. The pacing is steady, letting us really feel the atmosphere and the emotions. If I had to point out something, the first chapter is a bit long in places, and at times I wanted the story to move a little faster, but it’s worth it for the depth it gives to the characters and their world. Overall, it’s a compelling start, and I’m excited to see how the story unfolds!"
WHITE OUT
"WOW...it was really deep. I really appreciate the way you showed the character's depth and the story has depth as well. I'm sorry i cant write long reviews but remember you wrote really nice. I loved how you wrote the story in a sombre and quiet way. It gave a sense of melancholy. Sorry but the vocabulary was advanced for me, so I may not have caught up in some places. It was a good one. Keep writing"
