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5/5

"The miniature world is an imaginative setting, and the connection between magic and self-belief gives Faith’s journey emotional purpose. Her relationship with Noah would benefit from more development, while the emphasis on the villains’ appearances sometimes distracts from their actions. The story’s strongest element is Faith’s search for kindness, confidence and belonging."

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