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Sun Blind

"The best thing about this story is the writing style which was tight and simple. There weren't a lot of wasted words on descriptions and dialogue. The plot was straightforward. The next best thing about this story is the "Scorch" itself. He's creepy and scary. I'd recommend this story to fans of short Sci-fi stories."

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Very suspensefull

"Good suspense "

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