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I genuinely love this.

"Look I might be a little biased because I'm your friend, but you write awesome. Selene is growing up to be basically the mini-Sirius (I mean not in the way of getting sent to Azkaban for no reason, but you get what I mean.) She's sassy, snarky and to be honest hilarious at moments. You've captured just how Hermione would speak, Ron would act and Harry would snap when he's mad. You've even done Gemini well by my standards. And I'm the one who made her so that's saying something. I can't wait to see more of her honestly, and though I could've texted you about this I'm putting it here so that others can see what I love about your writing. It's like you're in the story not just reading it and you really deserve more readers. I'd read anything you write, and this isn't just because I'm your friend. I know you're going to call me sappy and probably going to wallow over this when you do text me, but I really do love how you write. Its descriptive, funny, fluffy and angsty all at once and in the right ways. So, call me biased but this is probably one of the best Harry Potter fanfics."

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