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Needs something...

"This is a great story and even better writing. Complex technical wording making the brain think like its solving a puzzle. However its a bit dry, and the main story line is unclear."

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Off the wall

"It was very suspenseful but about halfway through the storyline, you can figure out who the architect is "

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