What is your opinion?
Author Notes
""Overall, amazing world building highlighted by intense dialogue of introspection. However, parts tend to ramble on with some minor grammatical errors. But, the effort put in in order to make up a slow pacing yet intense fantasy story is something to at least give credit to." This what one person said to me on Reddit over the first 5 chapters I put on r/creativewriting. TBH, this is about as good as a comment I can get for my story that was made during a deeply dark moment in my life (mental health is important y'all; No shame in seeking help)."
