TIR NA NOG. THE CRIMSON KING

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Summary

The journey begins withe Jeantes Peak, The mighty Phoenix beasts that protect it and the men and women who risk their lives to restore life to a dying world with everything standing in their way. This first story is a mere glimpse into the life of Abbey. A young girl who has no idea what her future and the future of her world Tir Na Nog has planned for her.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

ORE EQUALS LIFE

Chapter One

Ore Equals Life


Cal sat on the edge of the roof, his legs dangling above the quiet yard, his eyes fixed

on the mountains in the distance. The evening sky glowed faintly, and across it, they

could clearly see the Phoenix—thousands of them—circling the jagged crown of

Jeantés Peak.

“Why do they always fly over that peak, Dad, there all so many other peaks and

none of them have Phoenix?” asked his daughter. Abby was nestled beside him

under a thick blanket, her voice filled with wonder.

Before Cal could answer, the roof door creaked open. A woman stepped out, her hair

stirring in the cool breeze.

“Have you got your blanket, Abby?” she asked.

“Yes, Mam.” Abby grinned, tightening the fabric around her shoulders. She smiled at

her father.

“And does your father remember that you travel to the village tomorrow for the first

time?” Helena asked, her tone carrying both playfulness and concern.

Cal smirked and gave a short laugh. “Yes, he remembers,” he said, deliberately

referring to himself.

“Well,” Helena replied, “don’t stay up here too late. I want to spend some time with

my daughter before she disappears for two weeks.” Cal rose to his feet and crossed

to where Helena stood. The lantern light from inside brushed against her worried


face. “It’s all right, love,” he told her gently. “If there’s even one reason we need to

hurry home, they’ll know. We’ll return immediately.”

“I know,” she said softly. “It’s just… the first time we’ll be apart.”

“I’m allowed to stay for two days,” Cal reminded her. “That’s long enough to know if

it’s safe to leave her there. If I have any doubt, Abby comes home with me. I’m just

as worried as you are.”

Helena exhaled, her eyes downcast. “The sooner it’s over, the better.”

“I agree,” Cal said, then smiled faintly. “But there’s a silver lining.”

“And what’s that?” she asked.

“You get me all to yourself for two weeks.”

Helena gave him a weary look. “Yes… and what’s the silver lining?”

Cal chuckled, and despite herself, Helena’s lips bent into a reluctant smile.

“It will be all right, love,” he said, wrapping her in a brief embrace.

When she retreated back inside, Cal returned to Abby, who was still staring into the

distance at the fiery birds circling Jeantés Peak.

“Is there room in there for me?” he asked, nodding at the blanket.

Abby giggled and lifted a corner for him. “hurry up dad, tell me the story before mam

calls us in. Cal settled down beside her and, with the Phoenix wheeling high above

the peak, he began to tell her the story of Jeanté.


Long before the city of Tir Na Nog cast its growing sprawling shadow across the land the

Mountain Tribe lived in quiet harmony with the heights. They were a people of the stone and

the storm—fierce, weathered, and as immovable as the cliffs they called home. They looked

down at the world below them never wanting more than the simple lives they had lead for

generations. The Emberback mountains had many peaks, all of which were inhabited by

various factions of the mountain tribe. All except for Jeantees Peak. The highest peak on the


Emberback range. reaching twice the height of its nearest rival it was a monster in

comparison to the rest of the mountain range.


No man ever climbed Jeantees Peak without cause. The Phoenix made certain of that. For

generations, the mountain tribe watched the Phoenix soar above Jantes Peak, and they

believed these mighty creatures were the souls of the mountain itself.


To the Mountain Tribe, the Phoenix were not beasts—they were keepers of balance. Their fire

did not burn for destruction but for equilibrium. Their flight controlled the wind, their hunger

tempered the growth of prey. And at the centre it all pulsed the blue ore—rare, warm, and

sacred. It ran beneath the stone of Jeantees peak like glowing veins, thin at the base,

thickening toward the summit until it coursed like a river beneath Jeantees Peak.


The Mountain Tribe revered the ore not for its power, but for its purpose. They built no

machines. They carved no devices. They honoured the warmth of the ore through rituals and

stories, through the careful tending of their land. Small amounts of ore could always be found

at the base of Jeantees peak and the mountain tribes collected and shared it for its many

purposes such as a constant source of glowing light and when night fell it emitted heat to

warm their homes. It was only fragments that they removed always carefull to avoid

disturbing the precious veins that fed the mountain. They protected it and warned all

outsiders: do not mine the ore. The mountain and the Phoenix need to be respected. We must

not sever the veins. There were many things that the mountain tribe traded with the city and

with other tribes in Tir N Nog. and in return they would receive things that they needed or

simply wanted. Blue ore to them was plentiful in the small amounts they gathered so they

would often use this as a trade for things the city had to offer. But in the cities, the blue ore

became more than just a source of heat and light. It became legendary. A power source like


no other. Fuel. Wealth and Weapons began to emerge And soon, ambition came knocking on

the mountain’s door.


Jeantee was just a boy when the serious traders first arrived—soft-handed men with gifts in

their smiles and weapons on their belts. They spoke of partnership, trade, opportunity. Some

of the mountain folk listened seduced by the promises of the traders. Jeantee’s father did not.

He was a man of stone and silence, and he taught Jeantee to listen to the mountain, not the

city. They lived on the peak next to the Phoenix.


As the Years passed. The cities grew hungrier. Traders returned with more men, more goods,

and more bribery. Some mountain men, tempted by the promise of riches, began to betray

the old ways. At first they secretly mined the veins ore at the base of the mountain. But as

time passed this no longer was enough and eventually they began to lead the city folk to the

lower veins. It began slowly. they chose the easy targets stripping ore from the surfaces of the

veins. but as the veins moved higher up the mountain they became more protected by the

dreaded Phoenix. The Phoenix never left their peak. The lived, fed, bred and died on this

peak. it was their world. So as time went on the miners from the city became more power-full

and began bringing more men to mine and creating large machines to help them to dig out

even more of the ore. They hollowed into the veins , carving deep wounds into the

mountain’s flesh. Until in many areas they completely severed the veins that were feeding the

ore avove them. The lush green land surrounding these areas began to die, animals no longer

fed or lived there and slowly as the years passed the Phoenix began to vanish.


Jeantee became a man watching the mountain beside him slowly dying. He remembered

when he was a child and the Phoenix soared in their thousands. Now somedays he struggled

to count even 10 as they were simply no longer able to live on a dying world. His father

wanted no war for his people so he stood aside while the city raped what they saw as an


abandoned part of the mountain. It was abondaned and always had been by men. but only

now was it becoming abandoned by life itself. Jeantee became, Strong, watchful, and deeply

troubled. He began climbing this peak climbing higher than any of his kin, watching the as

last Phoenix circled above only in areas that were still lush and it was very clear to him what

was causing this death.. Nesting grounds once warm and rich in life were now brittle and

lifeless. The air held no hum of insects. The winds howled differently. He saw the pattern.

Where veins were severed, life faded. Where they remained intact, life endured. So he

gathered a few of his closest who still remembered the old ways—Eral, his quiet cousin with

eyes like flint; Bryn, a hunter who had lost her brother to a mining collapse; and Tamber, a

former trader of ore to the city, who had become disgusted by what he once helped to do. It

started small but after a few weeks they were many. they were nothing but a rag tag group of

mountain men but they all shared one mission. One vision. Restore the peak and restore life.

They knew they were not power-full enough to start a war with the city so they decided that

they must educate them and create an awareness. confident that if the city people could

understand the damage they were causing they would cease mining immediately.


Together, they watched the traders work and followed them to their hidden loading site which

was heavily guarded. Months of mined ore was stored here. Huge crates stacked high ready

for the next transport to the city. They waited until nightfall until this latest load was about to

leave. Then, swift as falling stone, they struck. They knew these mountains better than any

city trader and although many of the guards were killed, most of the traders were taken alive,

and their weapons thrown into the ravine. Jeantee did not want blood. He wanted

understanding. But the city guards on seeing these wildlings immediately fought. Their fight

was pointless. These mountain men were harder, stronger and their hunger to protect the ore

was not a job. It was them protecting the old ways just like their fathers would have.


For two full days They forced the miner prisoners to return the ore they had up the slopes to a

severed vein Jeante had scouted weeks before—a long, winding tunnel, stripped bare and

lifeless. Jeante could see that this vein was feeding a huge network of blue ore on the

mountain. He wated the ore returned back into this vein. He had an opinion. An idea. This

was his test.


“What are you doing?” one trader spat. His name was Cal. Young, sharp, cynical. “You’ll

gain nothing from this.”


“Not gain,” Jeante replied. “Restore.” The land surrounding this part of the mountain was dry

and bare of life.


The work was brutal. The crates were heavy, and the wind at that height was cruel. But one

by one, they emptied the blue ore back into the wound, pressing it into the stone. Until every

single piece they had in that delivery was returned. Most of the traders were too scared to

object or complain so just did what they were told. Except for Cal. he constantly mocked

Jeante and his men for what he saw as a pointless crusade. “So what happens now” mocked

Cal. “its just going to come to life is it” almost laughing as he said it.


Jeantee just sat. Watching. Hoping. He and His men were exhausted. Jeante told every one to

just wait. Hours passed. Most fell asleep. And then at last it began, a low vibration through

the ground beneath them. the dry dirt they stood on began to almost bounce slightly to the

hum that was growing. Everyone woke. Everyone watched.


The ore began to shimmer and become brighter as the hum became louder. The ore they had

filled the vein with began to fuse. Melting into itself. No longer in pieces it now hardened

again into one solid tubular mass. The walls of the tunnel pulsed as if they were taking their

first breath. Then a still silent calmness fell over the land.


Jeantee turned to the captives and thanked them for their help. “ you must travel back to the

city and tell your leaders we will no longer stand by and let you destroy this world. The ore is

now under our protection. The traders fled immediately running but Cal did not. He sat down.

Jeante looked at this with confusion and asked him. “Why do you not leave.” Cal the defiant

cheeky trader just hung his head and said. “ I wasn’t expecting it to start vibrating and

glowing and then putting itself back together. I want to see if anything else happens. May I

stay and watch” Jeante although surprised by the traders new attitude agreed and told his men

to feed Cal. After an hour or two had passed Cal said “well it looks like that’s it for now. So

I’ll leave with your permission” . “You may leave at your will” replied Jeante, still confused

by the coolness of this city man. Cal wandered off but a few moments later, Cal called out. “

JEANTE. He had wandered a short distance and now stood at the cliff’s edge, eyes wide.

“You need to see this.” The mountain men followed. What they saw stole their breath. From

below, across the slope, animals were moving—foxes, elk, hares, insects by the thousands.

They moved in clusters, drawn along the repaired vein. Birds wheeled in overhead. Colour

began blooming in the moss that had been grey just hours before. Jeante said nothing. He

didn’t need to. Cal stepped forward, slowly removing his miners tool belt. It fell to the earth

with a soft clink. “I have never understood it when people say that something was a life

changing experience. I will not have any use for these tools ever again. I’ll never mine this

ore again,” he said. Jeante looked at him. For the first time, Cal’s eyes held no mockery, no

cunning. Only awe. Life had returned just like Jeantee had predicted and Jeantee was

astonished. His life had changed in an instant. This part of the mountain was breathing again.

And high above, in the smoke-coloured sky, the cry of a single Phoenix echoed across the

peaks. Cal panicked and tried to run but Jeante placed his huge hand on cals shoulder and

said “wait.” The Phoenix soared downwards towards them. Everyone stood frozen as it

slowed above them and then landed hard with a loud boom directly in front of Jeante. A


huge creature. Cal looked to Jeante for reassurance but even Jeante stood speechless looking

up in awe at this creature. Cal realised then that this was the same for Jeante as it was for him.

A ridiculous sequence of events that defied all reasoning. It stepped slowly towards Jeantee.

Jeantee stood taller and stared directly into the huge creatures fiery eyes. Not a sound could

be heard except for the deep breaths the creature as it moved its huge head downwards and

with the tip of its sharp beak pressed into the skin of Jeantees chest. Its eyes piercing

watching Jeantees face. Cal wanted to run. Moving nothing but his eyes he scanned the faces

Of Jeantees men. They were just as he was. Terrified. Jeantee just stood still at first. Then

unbelievably he took a step forward puffing out his chest as if showing his bravery. Cal could

hold it no longer and began wetting himself uncontrollably, as he wondered if this was the

bravest or the stupidest man he had ever met in his whole life. Then with a fast swipe the

huge Phoenix it ran its jagged beak across Jeaantes chest cutting slightly into his skin. Blood

began to pour from the wound and the Phoenix paused, Staring into Jeantees eyes. He did not

even flinch. Just stared straight back at the creature. It then raised its head to the peak of the

mountain and let out a deafening roaring cry. And with that it raised its huge wings an

flapped just once pushing itself upwards. The wind flung jeantees men and Cal in all

directions but although Jeantee stumbled, he remained standing as he watched the creature fly

upwards. Cal was in a state of panic and said “we must run”. Jeantee calmy said. “ that was

not a warning, it was a welcome”. “I’ve seen men venture too far up here and watched those

creatures tear them to pieces”. said Cal . “It is almost like it knows what you just did for

them”. “Yes they’ve watched us all this time “ said Jeantee. “why would they not understand.

Your people have stripped this mountain of life for years. They understand that. Why would

they not understand that we just restored part of that life. You Cal . You and your kind are the

only ones who do not understand how the world you live in works”. Cal dropped his eyes to

the ground.” I understand now” he said. “I see what we have done. i swear to you Jeantee on


my life. That I will do anything you ask of me to help restore more of this world”. “All I ask

is that you send a message to your leaders. The ore is now under our protection. And if it is a

war that they desire then it is a war we will give them” Said Jeantee. Not angrily but more

relieved. As he was right. The ore did bring life to the mountain. And the ore was alive.


But Jeantee knew this was only a beginning. This small amount of ore that they had

recovered had revealed its real power. The power to restore life .Most of the blue ore was

already long gone—shipped to the city, hoarded in vaults, consumed by machines. There was

no way to recover enough to restore every severed vein. Not in his lifetime. So instead he

swore a new path to protect it. Over the next few months, Jeantee became a sentinel of the

peak. As word spread through the rest of the peaks to the other parts of the mountain tribe

what started as a rag tag group quickly became an army. All of who had one job to do. Protect

the peak and protect the ore. They tracked the paths of miners and ambushed them when they

trespassed. Jeantee stood tall before their tools and their machines, warning them to turn

back. Word spread also through the mining crews and most fled at the sight of him and his

ever growing army—weathered, cloaked in furs, his eyes burning with purpose. A few dared

to raise arms against him and his men but none lived to try again or tell the tale. Jeantee did

not kill for pleasure. He punished only when warnings failed. He did not want blood. He

wanted balance. And as more months passed more Phoenix appeared and the life to some

parts of the mountain became fully restored. All from the one single vein that they had

restored. There were hundreds of other veins still empty of ore. He became a ghost to the

miners, a myth among the traders. A man who spoke with mountains, who was protected by

firebirds. They feared him—but he hoped they might one day understand him. Because

Jeantee did not want to destroy men. He wanted to protect the last breath of the mountain that

had given him life. And still circling the summit, that one Phoenix watched him

always—from above. When Jeantee woke in the mornings it appeared above. He did not have


to come outside. It began its day when he began his, and all day every day it would soar high

above him. His own men called the bird his protector. and the story spread far beyond the

mountains. It gave Jeantee power. Not power to rule or lead. But a power inside himself. A

power that his father had. The power of just knowing what was right.