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A great winter read!

"The first chapter worked really well as a pilot. Chapter 2 also stands out with memorable moments, and the interaction between Sadie and her niece was my favorite part so far. Jake’s POV was a smart choice. The pacing feels just right, and your choice of words consistently lands at the moments where it matters most."

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