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great characters, story with lots of potencial.

"first of all I have to say that I've truly enjoyed Nooriva's story. I loved the characters. The beginning is very captivating, spicy, risky even. But unfortunately at one point it feels as if the author lost it's spark and rushed through the story. There are some holes in the plot. One very out of place chapter, and some characters forgotten. I also felt as if she was afraid of putting her character through tougher situation, which seems to me as missed opportunities, I would have loved to see more of Cassian as the villain along Celeste, and have Vulk cornered Even have them question their love at some point. So, all in all, it feels like a first draft with so much potential, I mean, I would see this if it was a tv series, honestly. still 5 stars! I loved it! "

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Loved it

"I really enjoyed this book. Lots of very good characters. "

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Amazing book!!

"This book is descriptive and thrilling i cant put it down! "

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The Alpha Devils Dark Temptation

"Bravo! I absolutely loved this book. Amazing characters and wonderful dialog. What a beautifully brutal love story!"

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5 giant gold stars!

"This book was a great read! The plot was so compelling that I couldn’t put the book down. There was great character development with everyone, but I especially loved Nyxara. I also give it 5 stars for smut! The only downside is that I’ve read it all now. "

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Love it

"I love the plot, the stories and the characters. Very good story "

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Extremely beautiful love!

"I so thought this would be a different story bc of how it started. It turned out to be the most beautiful fierce undeniable love between flame & moon, Alpha Devil Vuk & Maureen! Absolutely breathtaking! Very spicy too! 🤭"

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"Such a beautiful story "

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Great story

"Love the love, respect and loyalty they have towards each other. Great plot, and loved the side story with Nyx. "

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Loved different take on alpha (king of hell type flex)

"Lots of smut, mutual adoration amongst some other enjoyable characters. Great book/story. "

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Exceptional

"Thank you for the story. Although it had a dark edge, I was spellbound right until the epilogue. Commendable. "

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Sad it's already the end🙁

"Thank you author for this masterpiece ❤️"

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A masterpiece!

"EROTICA ✅ ROMANCE ✅ DANGER ✅ I loved it all. Everything you can think of in a book,✅"

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My favourite Character

"Okay... beginning of this novel I actually loved Nyxara so much but it seems Kael is becoming my favourite person now 😫😫 Like why am I seeing him in my dreams 😂"

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His hell bound muse

"The story is compelling and pulls you in, makes you root for the characters happiness"

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Beautiful Work of Arts

"omg!!! this story is so hot and sexy!!! read it!!! omg!!!"

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Power Influence looks good on her

"Now this is what i’m talking bout!!! look her happy she is with the way people are respecting her!! that’s Vuk influence!! slay queen!! slay your enemies 😂 "

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Can’t stop reading!

"I love the characters and immediately cared about what’s happening to them. I can’t wait for more!"

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Romantically cruel

"A harsh love story, cruel enough to be good. Page turner extraordinaire, not for the weak of hearts "

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Love it

"Not quite sure where the Azrael and Nyxara plot lines are going but very willing to stick around to see what happens. I hope you post often. thanks for a a great story so far. "

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