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A strong story with lots of potential!

"I really enjoyed this story. The plot was engaging and well thought out, and the writing flowed beautifully. I especially loved the name of the vampire queen, Seraphina. Nova was an interesting character, and I would have loved a bit more detail about his background at the beginning of the story. Learning more about who he is and having a stronger physical and personal description early on would have helped build a deeper connection. That said, it was great to see him really come alive toward the middle and end of the book :) Overall, I thought the plot was strong, the writing was great, and I would love to see this continued into a series, perhaps following Aurora as she grows up? :) Great job Kaiden! "

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