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Queens of the Skyline: Brewing Love

"One of my favorites. Kept me awake.Plot superb. Great characters. My kind of happy ending. I just loved it from beginning to the end. "

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GOOD WRITING STYLES PLUS LIVE THE STORY

"After my come back to inkitt after 6 years. This is the first story i read, and I'm glad i read it beautifully written"

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Transformation heureuse

"Bien qu'un peu longue,j'ai adorée cette histoire. D'abord parce qu'elle se passe entre deux femmes, mais aussi parce qu'elle se termine bien. Evidemment, au cours de la naration, j'ai parfois eu des envies de meurtre, particulièrement envers le père, mais dans l'ensemble, je n'avais qu'une hate, parvenir à la fin. Non pas parce que je m'ennuyai, mais parce que certains chapitres étaient trop dramatiques à mon gout. Bravo pour cette belle aventure. Alain"

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To author

"Author disappointed me from " goodbye" chapter. No creativity? no CEO brilliant minds ? Just give up? Two pathetic lovers! The happy ending was a kindness of a villain . "

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Really like the setting, but...

"I really like the setting and the dynamic of the characters, but I unfortunately can't get over the constant AI-isms in literally every second paragraph: "This is not X, this is Y/<metaphor>. Adjective. Adjective."; "This is not just <superlative>, this is <hyperlative>, <transformation>". I don't have an issue with using AI at all, but it feels like there's a right way and a wrong way to do so: this didn't feel like the right way to me, and I have read other stories that aren't shy about using the "AI-Assisted" label on this site and am surprised that this story isn't."

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