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GOOD WRITING STYLES PLUS LIVE THE STORY

"After my come back to inkitt after 6 years. This is the first story i read, and I'm glad i read it beautifully written"

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Really like the setting, but...

"I really like the setting and the dynamic of the characters, but I unfortunately can't get over the constant AI-isms in literally every second paragraph: "This is not X, this is Y/<metaphor>. Adjective. Adjective."; "This is not just <superlative>, this is <hyperlative>, <transformation>". I don't have an issue with using AI at all, but it feels like there's a right way and a wrong way to do so: this didn't feel like the right way to me, and I have read other stories that aren't shy about using the "AI-Assisted" label on this site and am surprised that this story isn't."

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