Inkitt
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Promising Start

"So from the chapters posted until now I have to say it is promising. The romance seems to have just started but not quite as the main male lead's barely been introduced. The story is about a girl who gets a prophecy about who her husband is going to be and her journey to it. She is called a Vestal but this doesn't seemed to be based on any real religion though I do see parallels with the historical Vestals kinda. Most of the magical elements haven't been introduced yet but I think they are going to Grammar is solid no major mistakes. Technical skill is passable. Plot is unfolding but not at an unreasonable rate. "

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