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Estou gostando bastante da história o enredo o romance é ótima a leitura prende ,da vontade de ler sem parar da pra entender a escrita muito bem parabéns a autora,eu recomendo o livro pra quem gosta de uma boa história de romance,escolhi esse livro porque gosto deste tipo de história,com suspense e uma boa picancia 🌶️🔥

"Gostei bastante da história com suspense e um romance picante que gosto. Não tem nada que eu não tenha gostado Eu recomendo este livro pra quem gosta de uma boa história."

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Couldnt stop reading

"Love the story "

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Kisa

"Die vielen vorangegangenen Kommentare sagen eigentlich schon alles aus! Ich muss mich einfach nur anschließen! Es ist großartig, mach extrem viel Spaß und hat sehr viel Spice! Einfach schön!"

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Great story

"Loved the story. Interesting characters. Very touchimg and also suspense. "

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Estupendo

"Es estupendo, como es la trama, como se desenvuelven los personajes. Simplemente me ENCANTA!!!"

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True Love Story

"This story was very well written. It was such a great read!! Highly recommend! "

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Great story

"I was spicy, with some action and tendernes. good read."

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Beautiful

"This is romantic porn i loooooved this book so much!"

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Good Story

"I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I just started reading these novels online and found the style and plot of this one more to my kind of reading. Not too far fetched and moved along with the plot at a good pace, not too much detail but enough to keep me intrigued so much so that I had trouble putting it down and not getting my planned work done 🤨(projects, housework, etc). I look forward to reading more from this author, but may have to be more disciplined with my time 😫"

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Best thing ever

"I LOVED THIS BOOK! It was soo heartfelt and beautiful. I wish to have someone like Elias in the future 🫠🥰 Amazing writing!!"

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Greats story

"Really great story. First the most important: This was exceptionally hot. Extremely well written sex scenes. The build up was magnificent. The less important: It needs a good proof read- my guess is that authors can't go back and edit once it's posted without losing all their reviews and essentially starting over, which is unfortunate. "

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about the story

"I cried I laughed and at last i loved it sooo much great story and heartwarming ending "

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Bien

"La trama está bien. Le recomendaría a una amiga. Las novelas son mis favoritas "

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Nice Story, and Hot too

"This story is good... And hot 🔥🔥 Although my logic brain keep worries about the age gap, but idk at this moment haha. Give it a try, it's a good story ❤️‍🔥"

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under his command, my best friends

"I have now read this story for the second time. enjoyed it as much as the first .there is a lot of intrigue that just keeps me going. really entertaining. I recommend to anyone who enjoys a good romance, it won't let you down. please keep writing for us!"

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Inhibitions bypassed🫶🏾

"This story has my admiration in an erotica romance: my inhibitions were definitely breached, so I read it twice 😉 Beautiful storytelling 🫶🏾"

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Picante

"Adictiva"

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Top notch writing. Keep it up

"I liked everything about the novel Wonderful book "

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Love it! Something different!

"Great story,love the characters and the dreamy hero especially! Thank you!"

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El padre de mi mejor amiga

"Quedé fascinada "

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