Inkitt
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Highly recommend

"This is a great erotic story. Lots of build up, awesome scenes. Only minor grammatical errors that don't take away from the story. "

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LEGIT FIRE

"I started this novel late Sunday night, and have reached the Trapdoor chapter... its only Tuesday. I'm OBSESSED, its deliciously dark and slightly sadistic, yet romantic, all in one. I. NEED. MORE! Cheers!"

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The Hollow Boys

"I love the different personalities and perspectives. I particularly love Ash, but they are all sexy. "

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Daddy's little pet whisperer

"I found this when checking through the author's profile and decided to read it. I absolutely have no regrets. XOXO 😘"

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More

"We need more REVERSE HAREM or mfm"

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Pretty decent

"I gave it five stars because its a fantastic story, but the pacing is a bit off for me in a way I cannot describe it feels kind of slow? Maybe its just because I am only halfway through it but I wish there was more character building. The plot is good so far though and I enjoy the fact the author went into the effort of actually putting Russian in the story I would recommend it to my friends!"

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Awesome

"This book is great, my only complaint (because I’m greedy) is that it needs to be updated with more chapters and frequently."

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Daddies Little Pet Whisperer

"Every time I get a notification for this book, I drop everything I'm doing just to come read it! This book has had me hooked from the start and I'm so excited for what's incoming!"

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Love!

"I love this story sooo much! Epic grin on my face every time I see an update! Keep up the good work!"

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Hot

"So unbelievably hot. "

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Daddies Little Pet Whisperer

"I'm loving this story so far and can't wait to see where this goes..."

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Hhj

"When will the next chapter come out 😭😭😭"

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"I like the plot, the flow and the characters. "

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Great story

"Dark subject matter but the characters have a sweet side. Loving it so far"

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Daddies little pet whisperer

"I enjoyed all of it so far wish it was actually finished "

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Daddies little pet whisperer

"I have just read the first chapters but it’s a compelling plot, Can’t wait to see her grow into a fierce lady with the four daddies "

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What the heck

"They just kill her? They say they love her and kill her?"

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