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13 Chapters In!

"Hot. Gives "exactly what Lily from Hells Bells would want to read". Fascinating. Creative. Uses a lot of topics and territories that are dangerous zones but makes them somehow deeply erotic and fascinatingly not disgusting at all. Two things to know - first, the author is phenomenal with their warnings of what is in it (PAY. ATTENTION.) and also, vitally, what ISN'T - which is extra helpful because of how close to those reader-heads-up emotional-subconscious beats seem to imply that those areas (for example, snuff) is directly where we are headed. But the second has to do with those emotional-subconscious beats. So far, at least, those beats are consistently misleading. Dialogue that seems to head where we're going in the story - at least in the "short" term of the first thirteen chapters - entirely does not pan out. I wouldn't call it "plot holes" because it leaves the option that we WILL come back around to what was gestured towards some day and it is perfectly reasonable in all of those situations that the characters sharing those quiet implications are actively lying. But if you walk in using and trusting in your usual narrative orienting-the-reader compass to make you feel safe through all the dangerous content, you will be, for better or worse, sharply denied that comfort and dragged along in a constant state of desperate disorientation while you try to figure out where the hell things are going. It is a process very fitting to the main character's experience and mindscape, but you should KNOW it. All this to say, extraordinary. Fan-girling and rapt attention. Keep in mind that you have to pay for a lot of content that, while technically not necessary, feels a little "well what's the point" to keep reading if you know you missed. But it's just the payment of a $10/month patreon, which people less poor than me can probably afford and, frankly, I believe the author deserves for her hard work from those who can spare it."

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The perfect kind of crazy

"Palescripts way of writing is truly capturing and absolutely beautiful. I enjoy every chapter and the plot just keeps revealing more and more of Libbys adventure and how deep everything actually goes. Definitely not everyones cup of tea since the smut can be very heavy and dark at times, so I'd recommend to read the TW carefully. It's an amazing story with beautifully written characters and just the perfect amount of fucked up!"

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A thoroughly enjoyable experience.

"I'm finally caught up after almost two weeks. Following Libby's journey has been quite the intense ride. This is so well written and every single character is interesting. I thoroughly enjoyed every moment of the story, even if I needed to put it down sometimes and take a break. I wouldn't have it any other way. It is so hard to find smut with a good plot that makes me feel things, and not just things that make me blush. I look forward to more chapters and to keep coming back to the world Palescript has built. "

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Compelling. Suspenseful. Awesome!!!

"5 stars all around. Just reached Chapter 20 and since I picked up this story I've been eagerly awaiting until I get a chance to read another chapter. Its been awhile since I've been so engrossed in a novel and I highly recommend a read - especially the bonus chapters. The spice level is hot but the characters, lore, scenery, development, and plot is amazing. "

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Fantastic!

"Libby is relatable, Eldra Vorn is a trip, and the world building is fantastic. I've recommended this to three friends already, and I am recommending it to you!"

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Review for For My Ascension

"Although I wouldn’t normally reach for a fantasy or paranormal romance, this story has definitely challenged me to explore more of these genres! I was in a really bad reading slump before this one, and I really enjoy the combination of action in the plot, romantic tension and chemistry between the leads and the wide spectrum of emotions the female character expresses that feel relatable. I’m curious to see if we will receive an origin chapter detailing what the female character was like and her relationships with the male leads before her memory was wiped. Excited to see what comes next for this one!"

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Dark Fantasy for the Sinful

"A delight to read for lovers of male yandere reverse harem with love interests in a variety of obsessive and dangerous flavors. Palescript masterfully builds up the lore and puzzle pieces leading to Libby's true nature. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes. "

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Take me where the sun don’t shine <3

"This story is such a ray of totally unhinged light in my life. Like okay, this is smut... a lot of it. But it’s also got real plot and character depth and keeps me coming back to see what else our lovely main character gets involved with. Plus, it’s well written in a way that is refreshing to find after sifting through so much that just isn’t. Great work being done here and I can’t wait for more! "

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Excellent

"So many scenes from this story live rent-free in my head. Palescript isn't afraid to cross lines and get gritty and raw. You haven't read a "dark romance" or even "monster smut" quite like this, I guarantee you. Not for the faint hearted, definitely check your triggers! "

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Deliciously spicy and engaging

"Ascension is so much fun! I binged all the existing chapters when I found it and am excited whenever a new chapter drops. The spice is hot and delves into some various strong kinky themes that can be difficult to find in well written content, and it is indeed well written! The characters have great variety and interesting backstories/development and the plot is quite intriguing. If you like the very dark spice, highly recommend."

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Yes Please!

"Like so many others, I first started reading for the spice. The spice delivered and then some! What surprised me was the actual world building and characters, drawing on everything from religion to myth and RPGs. A strong and evolving female lead also lakes me very happy! Well written, good pacing, and interesting for more than one reason. "

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Deliciously Debaucherous

"This story has consumed me. Dark romance, two MMC's, kidnapping, non-con, this thing has it all. I had originally thought this was going to be your run-of-the-mill dark romance from Reddit. I was absolutely wrong. The writing is so sophisticated and detailed that it feels like a breath of fresh air, honestly. The author does an amazing job of showing instead of telling the reader, and there is so much raw emotion in it, it's hard to look away. I had chosen the black flag path, with no spoilers, just content warnings, and it is a RIDE. I love these characters so much I've found myself doodling them. I wait at the edge of my seat for each new chapter. "

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Libby's Dark Adventure

"Buckle up and get ready for a turn for the worse for Libby, then it jumps off a cliff. You never know what is next and the turns this story takes is wild. Poor Libby :) but maybe just maybe its exactly what she wants..."

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So crazy but so good!

"Libby is in for a crazy ride with twists and turns that I did not see coming! Normally, I read the content warnings as a wish list - and this one tops everything else I have read so far! If you have read most of the published TikTok or Reddit-recommended smut and think “what if it was wilder and with a sprinkle of aliens/demons and increasingly more difficult (and sexy) challenges?” this book is for you!"

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Finally

"I'd taken a break from reading anything online from the writing that left me frustrated and bored far more often than not. Then I found this. I admit that the genre isn't one that's taken my fancy before, but something drew me in. Whether it's the pacing, the characters, or a secret something that hooked me in and kept me leashed to the story, wanting more. Enough that, when the nature of the genre itself nearly making me sending it to DNF territory, just at the right time a morsel of light in the gloom of it kept me in. If I don't end up finishing it then it would be my own too delicate tastes, not the writer or the story."

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Deliciously Depraved

"The dove is dead, yes, perhaps even festering by this point. Yet still, I feast. Fenrow and Galen are so unfairly yet intriguingly cruel towards our hapless Libby. This FMC is forced to undergo some utterly depraved scenarios (SPOILER: I think the dark gloryhole dungeon was perhaps, imo, the most mentally punishing porn I've ever read. [And this could just be the fact it plays on my fear of the dark] Right before the actual GamesTM begins.) If you are someone who desires smut that is unfair, punishing, and cruel then this is DEFINITELY for you. This is, by all intents and purposes, a TRUE Dark Romance book ; Every chapter is guaranteed to make your legs cross, your loins burn, and ensure you exceed your daily hydration goals. (Especially with how wet it'll make you!) a certified Dead Dove Classic 🕊️✨💖"

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The sweetest sin to read

"The harshest spice is woven with the highest sweet...intoxicating to read and worthwhile. This isn't another lazy example of spice with just enough quick "plot" slotted in to make it readable. This is some good dark fantasy writing. The plot pulls the reader's intrigue and sparks imagination through the chapters just as well as the VERY spicy scenes do. Palescript maintains a fantastic teeter-totter between extremes, with attention to world building and compelling characters. Just as she richly describes that which is difficult to take in, the severe and shocking pain, ugliness, and violence, she just as powerfully and generously rewards the reader with beauty, charm, and softness. The descriptions given to world building are sumptuous, and the characters are fantastic. This is definitely the most delicious unhealthy treat that you will not want to stop consuming. The bonus chapters are worth it!!! Hoping there will be an opportunity to purchase this is print ❤️ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Absolutely DEPRAVED, harsh, vivid spice, interwoven with STUNNING detail and intriguing storytelling. And all written for the female gaze 👏"

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So good

"Love it. Like so much "

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Depravity at its finest

"Palescript has found such a good balance between interesting plot, character development and some next level spicy scenes. As dark and turbulent as the story is, I cannot put it down. Not for the faint hearted."

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I just love everything about this series!

"I started reading this because it came up on multiple channels while I was searching for new content with some of the tags I love. I didn't want to read it at first, because it was unfinished and I'm normally too impatient for works in progress. I'm so glad I broke my own made up rule, because this series is everything I wanted and more! Of course, the smut is scorching, but it's more than that. The world building and lore are very interesting to slowly learn more about and I can immerse myself into the world the author built. When I read, I am Libby. For better or worse 😂 At the heart of it for me are the relatable, human emotions laced throughout this fantastical tale. Every MMC makes me feel a different way. Warm and fuzzy feelings, hot and bothered, outright mad or very sad. The thing is that reading this always makes me feel some type of way and that is its strength to me. Not to mention the bonus chapters which turn up the heat even more 🔥 What makes this stand out for me even more, is that in addition to the series itself there is a dedicated Discord server with lots of lovely people which truly feels like a welcoming and safe community to me ❤️ People from all over the world ready to yap, rant, rave and more with each other. Brought together by the medium of degenerate content, that's not something you see every day. In conclusion, give it a try if you like the look of the tags and you'll probably be very glad you did. And if you feel so inclined after reading a bit, maybe I'll see you pop up in the Discord server ☺️"

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