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Good job

"I loved the story. The epilogue could have had more detail. It seemed rushed, but I loved the story. The twist ending was done so well. "

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Susan

"An unexpected believable ending. Best of luck. You will certainly succeed and will feature in best selling lists if you continue to write like this."

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The one between us

"I'm so engrossed, I have to know what happens next. I had this strange, tingling feeling the whole time I was reading. Constant alert in my head; in a good way. I'm hooked!😭🤚🤍 "

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