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What is your opinion?

A bit late but whatever

"So... I really really enjoyed reading this. I know this hasn't been updated in a while. I would definitely enjoy more of the story and especially the developing bond between the charecters. The one thing I would say is that maybe this story should focus a bit more on the main plot now instead of the game. Don't get me wrong, I love how the story is presented, it's just that I would like more insight onto the main story. That's all. Kudos!"

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