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Great story

"I like the different in aliens and the surprise that arise. Keep up the good writing!"

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Betrayed by Utopia

"Oh wow will she find her brother??? 🤔🤔🤔"

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Great read 😊

"I think this story had awesome scenes and really cool ideas thrown in there that could’ve been taken more in depth. Like the time traveling. Or How the dini operate. The ending feels rushed, but overall a great short read! "

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