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RETAZOS

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Summary

Sensaciones, ideas, pensamientos, una expresión de mi mundo interno que quizá sea muy similar al de otros.

Genre
Other
Author
2040
Status
2mo ago
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Cielo y Paz

Me gusta la paz y tranquilidad que hay en azul limpio del cielo, escondiéndose en las nubes manchadas que estallan en su propio ser.

Esa paz y tranquilidad instalada en la profundidad celestial que lo atrae todo en mi como si fuera un imán y yo el metal.

Me absorbe, me hace volar y me deja vibrando, navegando en una extraña sensación de éxtasis.

Paz, no hay palabra más exacta para describirlo, el cielo es simple y llanamente la materialización de aquél concepto incapturable, aquella idea tan deseada y perseguida que cuando la alcanzas se te escurre entre las manos, no se la puede capturar, solo respirar.

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Good Writing

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