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Nemesis

"I was taken on a magical journey, sensuous and exciting. The interplay of dream and reality is beautifully rendered and asks the question, how can we tell which is which, where one stops and the other begins? Perhaps all powerful dreams are memories of 'slides' between worlds. Yet for all its mysticism, the adventure is rollicking in the 'boy's own' style. A page turner. Can't wait to read the rest of this!"

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nemesis

"As a man, I really hate to admit this, but it almost brought me to tears. This story has everything for everyone. It's beautifully paced, and magical It takes you on a journey between dimensions that is timeless. I loved the love scenes, the language, the rhythm and tempo of the author's writing. Love it!"

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