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Good Girl

"Kelly you are such a a good girl, and a great writer. I'd love to have you collared with the leash in my hand at a large gathering of your friends, peers and family. You'd be wearing beautiful see through panty set. I'm sure you'd love every moment of it evening. "

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An amazing chapter

"An exciting scenario. This story has one of the best chapters I've read. I love the way KellyTheSub plays with the dynamics between one woman and her coworkers and bosses. I love how the other characters use the main character's vulnerability, exposure and shame. Also some really well timed lines of dialogue. "

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