(Introductory)
On October 6th (one day before the incidents start), Madora and Neiara were playing together. They might be 20(Neiara) and 22(Madora), but they love playing and hanging out as if they’re forever 10.
“Hey,” Neiara said, nudging her. “What if we went somewhere spooky tomorrow? You know, for adventure’s sake.”
Madora looked at her with a wide grin, eyes bright with curiosity. “Like where?”
Neiara shrugged, pretending to think. “I heard there’s this old building outside town. People say it’s haunted… or cursed. Either way—it sounds like us.”
Madora laughed. “You and your haunted places. Fine, but if a ghost shows up, I’m blaming you!”
Neiara smirked, tugging Madora’s sleeve. “Deal. But if we find treasure, it’s mine.”
Neither of them knew that this small, playful promise would pull them into something far darker than they’d ever imagined. The laughter that filled the air that night would soon be replaced with whispers they couldn’t explain… and shadows that moved when no one was there.
Hi there!
I just started reading your story and it completely captured my heart Every scene is written so beautifully it felt magical I especially loved how Madora and Neiara’s deep friendship and their journey into that mysterious abandoned building is written with such vivid emotion and intrigue it really pulled me into your world and kept me reading
I’d love to share it with a few friends who would appreciate it just as much Can’t wait to see more of your amazing work You can also find me on Instagram: @lizziedoesitall
Thank you for creating such a heartfelt story
Best
Lizzy
@lizzydoesitall6192 No. That’s cuz it’s supposed to be a real story (it’s NOT real at all-FAKE STORY!!!!). But it would be interesting 🤔🌺