After Ten

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Summary

In a city where survival after the age of ten is a brutal trial, innocence is a liability and every choice can mean life or death. Hara, newly past her tenth year, must navigate a world of gangs, corruption, and hidden dangers, where allies can betray and enemies may offer unexpected aid. As she fights to survive, she uncovers dark secrets about the system that governs her world—truths that challenge her understanding of morality, loyalty, and the cost of growing up in a place where no one is truly innocent. After Ten is a tense, unflinching story of resilience, cunning, and the struggle to retain humanity when the world demands you abandon it.

Genre
Scifi
Author
jm003
Status
Complete
Chapters
16
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 - Intake Day

The transport trucks arrived before sunrise, engines rattling like they were coughing up their last breaths. Juvenile Sector C always smelled worst at that hour—bleach layered over rot, old blood baked into concrete, piss that never quite washed away. Fear had a smell too. Mara Kade swore it did. Sour and metallic, like someone had cracked open a mouthful of coins and let them rust.

She stood just inside Intake, clipboard tucked against her ribs, boots planted wide. The stance mattered. Guards who leaned got questions. Guards who softened got tested. Guards who failed didn’t last.

The first truck door slammed open.

Sound poured out before bodies did—crying, shrill and raw, a chorus of panic that hadn’t learned yet how useless it was. An officer jumped up into the truck and dragged the first kid down by the arm. The boy’s shoe caught on the step and twisted sideways with a wet crack. He screamed, high and thin, until another officer slammed his head into the concrete hard enough to rattle teeth.

“Line them up,” someone barked.

They never lined up.

Children spilled out in clusters—some clinging to each other, some frozen stiff, some fighting like cornered animals. Plastic cuffs snapped tight around wrists still soft with baby fat. One girl vomited the moment her feet hit the ground, yellow bile splashing across her socks. She slipped in it and went down hard, sobbing as an officer yanked her upright by her hair.

Mara watched without blinking.

That part had taken years.

A boy near the end of the line shook so violently his knees knocked. His shirt was inside out, cartoon dinosaurs stretched across his chest. Red markers stained his hands—thick lines across his fingers and palm, the kind kids used when they pressed too hard. Homework, maybe. A birthday card. Something ordinary that hadn’t mattered yesterday.

Mara checked his intake form.

Name: Tomas Hale

Age: 10 years, 1 day

Charge: Conspiracy to Commit Infrastructure Sabotage

Status: Guilty (Pre-Assigned)

Yesterday had been his birthday.

He was crying so hard his nose bled. The red dripped onto his shirt, smeared when he tried to wipe it away with cuffed hands.

“I’m sorry,” he kept saying. “I didn’t know. I didn’t do anything. I swear—I swear—”

“Shut up,” an officer snapped.

Tomas didn’t. He couldn’t. The words tumbled out of him like they might build a ladder back to yesterday if he stacked them right.

They stripped him next.

Clothes into the burn bin. Shoes kicked aside. Socks peeled off wet with fear-sweat. He tried to cover himself, arms shaking, ribs sharp under pale skin. An officer grabbed his wrists and slammed him face-first against the wall. His forehead split open with a dull, meaty sound. Blood streaked down the concrete like a fingerprint dragged too far.

Mara marked the box on her clipboard.

☑ Non-Compliant Behavior Observed

She hated that box most of all.

The scanners hummed as they herded the kids forward. The machines were tall and narrow, ribbed with metal plates that slid inward when activated. One by one, the children stepped inside. The doors sealed. The hum deepened.

Needles deployed.

Some screamed when the tracking implants punched into the base of their necks. Others went silent, eyes blown wide as the metal slid home. A boy fainted and cracked his chin open on the scanner floor. Blood pooled between the grooves until an officer hosed it away.

When it was over, the kids looked smaller. Something essential had been carved out of them—not the implant, but the certainty that their bodies still belonged to them.

They marched them down the corridor next. Long. Windowless. Lit by buzzing strips that flickered just enough to keep migraines blooming behind the eyes. The walls were scarred with scratches, tally marks, names half-scrubbed away.

Names had been removed years ago. Numbers were cleaner. Easier to erase.

As they passed the lower levels, the screaming changed. Less panic. More pain. Somewhere below, someone was begging. Somewhere else, something heavy hit metal again and again until it stopped.

A new guard walked beside Mara, pale and sweating through his uniform. He flinched every time a sound echoed.

“Does it—” he swallowed, “—does it always sound like that?”

Mara didn’t look at him. “You’ll stop hearing it.”

“That’s worse,” he said.

She almost agreed.

They reached Cell Block C-4. Doors slid open with hydraulic groans. The children were shoved inside, two or three to a cell designed for one. The doors slammed shut. Fists hit metal. Screams bounced back.

Tomas was still crying.

Mara paused outside his cell. He looked at her through the bars, eyes swollen, blood drying black under his nose.

“Please,” he whispered. “I’ll be good. I promise. I won’t—”

She didn’t let herself listen.

She had learned early that promises meant nothing here.

As she turned away, a public broadcast crackled to life overhead. The voice was smooth, calm, reassuring.

“The Year Ten Accountability Act ensures a safer future for all citizens. Innocence is a myth. Responsibility is strength.”

The children screamed louder.

Mara walked on.

She told herself this was necessary. That chaos had been worse. That pretending children were harmless had only delayed the inevitable. She told herself the law was simple, and simple things were easier to survive.

But as the doors sealed behind her and the corridor swallowed the sound, a thought slipped through the cracks she’d built so carefully:

Yesterday, Tomas had blown out candles.

Today, he was a criminal.

And tomorrow, the system would say he’d always been one.