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Broken Trust
"This X guy needs a punch in the face! "
F this X person! Love it!
"I really enjoy chapters that end with one line that compels you to click, next chapter... Broken Trust has that in every chapter. It's equally suspenseful and exciting. I was to read more, but I'm looking over my shoulder before I click next!"
This is a great start!
"Interesting premise but the lack of punctuation is a bit rough, if you fix it the story could be great! "
