3 knocks And Your Out
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3 knocks And Your Out

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Summary

Eli thought moving into a quiet house meant a fresh start. But every night at 2:13 AM, someone knocks. Three slow, patient knocks. He never opens the door. He never looks. But the knocking keeps coming — earlier each night. Neighbors whisper warnings. The last owner vanished. The house chooses people. And the knocking? It’s not asking to come in. It’s asking Eli to come out. As the house begins to change — reflections lagging, footsteps upstairs, dirt under his nails — Eli realizes he’s not alone. And the knocking man is getting closer.

Status
10mo ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1- The First Night

CHAPTER ONE — THE FIRST NIGHT

The house didn’t look haunted. That was the weirdest part.

It wasn’t sagging or covered in vines or sitting on some lonely hill like it wanted to be dramatic. It was just… normal. Beige siding. A porch light that flickered sometimes. A mailbox that leaned a little to the left like it was tired of holding everyone’s secrets.

Eli stood on the sidewalk with his last box under his arm, staring at the place like it was staring back. He didn’t know why he felt that way — like the house had eyes — but the feeling crawled up his spine anyway.

“New start,” he muttered. “Fresh beginning. No big deal.”

He didn’t believe himself.

Inside, the air felt colder than it should’ve. Not freezing — just cold enough to make him rub his arms and wonder if the AC was broken. The house smelled like dust and old wood, like nobody had lived there for a long time. But the real thing that got him was the silence.

It wasn’t quiet.

It was waiting.

He tried to shake it off. He unpacked. He set up his bed. He shoved clothes into drawers. He played music on his phone just to fill the space, but the sound felt thin, like the walls were swallowing it.

By midnight, he was exhausted. He crashed into bed without even brushing his teeth, the kind of tired where your bones feel heavy.

He didn’t remember falling asleep.

But he remembered waking up.

Because at 2:13 AM, the house made sure he did.

Three knocks.

Slow.

Even.

Patient.

Knock.

Knock.

Knock.

His eyes snapped open, heart slamming against his ribs like it wanted out. He didn’t move at first. Didn’t breathe. Just listened.

The knocks came from the front door. He knew that somehow — the same way you know when someone’s staring at you even if you can’t see them.

He sat up, every muscle tight.

Maybe it was a neighbor.

Maybe someone needed help.

Maybe—

Knock.

Knock.

Knock.

Same rhythm. Same patience. Like whoever — or whatever — was out there wasn’t in a hurry. Like it had all the time in the world.

Eli swung his legs out of bed and stood. The floorboards creaked under his feet, and the knocking stopped instantly.

He froze again.

The house went dead silent.

Too silent.

He took one step into the hallway.

Another.

Another.

The closer he got to the front door, the heavier the air felt, like he was walking into deep water. His breath came out shaky. His hand hovered over the doorknob.

He didn’t open it.

He didn’t even touch it.

He just stood there, staring at the door like it might stare back.

Then, from the other side, something whispered.

Not words.

Not a voice.

Just… breath.

Like someone leaning close to the wood, waiting for him to make a choice.

Eli backed away slowly, heart pounding so loud he was sure the whole neighborhood could hear it. He didn’t sleep the rest of the night. He sat on the couch with every light on, staring at the door until the sun finally came up.

When morning hit, he told himself it was nothing. A prank. A dream. A weird first-night freakout.

But deep down, he knew the truth.

The knocking wasn’t random.

It wasn’t a mistake.

It wasn’t going to stop.

And the house — his new house — wasn’t done with him yet.

Let Grayson Creamer know what you thought about this chapter!

Ghostwriter2
Ghostwriter2

I cannot wait for chapter two I cannot wait to find out who's at the door ❤️

10 months

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