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Wow!

"Wow you know your stories. You can really write sci-fi Mia. Thanks"

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INNOCENTPRISENER

"So far the story is good it started with a little more thought in POV than I like but picked up nicely .The characters were good. Tech.was described to a level of understanding as far as Sci-Fi goes.Overall a good story. I hope there's a second part.Seems the author left it open for that to take place.Good story, thanks for sharing. Peace"

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Thrilling

"Read it in one go. Couldn't put it down. "

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