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Smoldering

"Kelly...K, What makes this so erotic is the combination of the flipped power dynamic between K and her boss as well as K’s journey as an innocent into a world she doesn’t quite understand that triggers rising feelings in her that are foreign yet smoldering. She captures her state during and after the experience when she exclaims to no one, “what the fuck!” What also makes it such a turn on is your slow, steady pacing combined with the guidance of the mysterious Zora that takes K somewhere we all want to go. You are the best, Kelly."

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Thank you

"Another great story from Kelly and about Kelly Totally loved it. Although I do love your longer story's as well my dear "

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Sehr schöne Geschichte mit Umkehr der Position

"Eine sehr schöne erotische Geschichte, die das Vertrauen gegenüber einer dominierenden Person und der Umkehr von Positionen (Chefin-Sekretärin) zeigt obwohl man auch die Stärke der Chefin bewundern kann. Sehr schön geschrieben. Es wäre schön, wenn sie auch auf Deutsch zu lesen wäre,"

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The Canning of The Boss

"This is a well written story that makes the reader care about all the characters. That said I can't understand why anyone would enjoy that kind of pain. There has to be a better way to deal with stress and leadership. I don't see Evelyn really changing since she has to continue being an overbearing boss in order to give herself permission to be punished. "

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