A Good Start

"Dear Santa ​reads like a script with lots of description. In between passages of characters and storyline is the letter to Chris Kringle and while this worked at the top of the story it began to fall out of favor as the story went on. I enjoyed It because it worked when the introduction was longer but as the descriptions and moments, in-between became shorter it was harder to follow and became too repetitive. If there was more action in-between those sections they would be far more interesting and the story would flow better. It also got to a point where I wasn’t completely sure what was a letter and what was happening. That should be more clear and I believe that would be if some parts of the letter were put together."