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A Hauntingly Vivid Start

"Stunning work with the atmosphere. The first chapter, "Stillborn," immediately sets the right tone — heavy, viscous, and chilling. The writing is alive, not cardboard; it pulls you into the world of stolen souls from the very first lines. Looking forward to the continuation!"

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It’s like listening to a true crime paranormal movie .

"All four chapters are very good so far . Instant mystery and storytelling that is well crafted . The only gripe I have is that there are only 4 chapters ! I can’t wait to read more . Love the vibe and mystery ! Great read so far ! "

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Haunting

"The story is beautifully written. It has me questioning who is Amery really? Cannot wait to see how everything unfolds."

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A fantastic start.

"I am intrigued to read what comes next, this is a story that bites into my dark bones, how is everyone connected? This has the making of something scarily good."

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