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So far so good

"Admittedly not the first story that I reached for in your collection but I’m liking where it’s going, especially or maybe because it seems like it’s one of those ones where there’s no good ending or win for anyone and where almost everyone is hard to root for minus the FMC. I like that it’s dark and sharp around the edges! "

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THE WRONG BROTHER

"This story will have you guessing and confused. The charters are amazing and trying to figure it out just stop because there’s more to come. Highly recommend you give it read😊"

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Despair and Desire

"I liked the suspense of people forced to live like puppets. Despair and control, and desire all intertwined. "

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Interessante Story

"Mir hat diese Geschichte wirklich gut gefallen... nur wurde es etwas lang... Trotzdem mag ich die Art, wie es erzählt wird. Danke, dass ich es lesen durfte"

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Trama interesante

"El libro empieza muy bien y la trama me ha interesado, pero hay escenas y diálogos que se repiten demasiado. Eso te hace perder el interés al final."

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