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Opia: A Short Story in Verse

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Summary

i can see galaxies in your eyes and all you see is nothing but hazel brown. Opia - the feeling of looking someone directly in the eye. In this short story made to celebrate pride, follow the heartache and heartbreak of a teenage boy as he falls for another boy with a dark past.

Status
Complete
Chapters
9
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

begin

shh

do you hear that?

that sound, echoing from the

chambers of your heart,

winding through the arteries,

veins

ventricles

mingling

c h a n g e

breathe in

the heart quickens

speeding

meeting with your iris,

cornea, pupils match

colors splash

in the distance, a dew drop falls

from an evergreen leaf

into a pristine pond

into your arms i want to lay

feel your heartbeat on my skin

up and down we breathe

hold my hand

your eyes see me

do they see my soul?

i can see galaxies in your eyes

and all you see

is nothing but hazel brown.

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