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"Congrats on your submission to Inkitt. Comedy is great medicine for the hamburger lover on a skateboard....sometimes it helps to read your work out loud to yourself and enhance your thoughts and work the story and plot in the direction you are heading for..........keep up the writing, you are an Author and the world awaits more of your work, and soon....................william elliott kern"

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