I used to
I used to shine bright like gold; now I'm all gray. This loss has led me astray. I cannot delay the grief of what I lost
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Poetry collection on Trying to heal from the loss of my angel baby i hope one day i can get my rainbow baby all I've ever wanted in life is to be a good wife and mom one day I'll achieve that as for know I'll write about the sorrow and grief i feel deep inside my heart this one's dedicated to those that feel my pain
I used to shine bright like gold; now I'm all gray. This loss has led me astray. I cannot delay the grief of what I lost
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Quenda: Overall a good story. Looks like it is in need of a good proof reader as it contradicts itself at times...but overall a good story.
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Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask
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Caspian Gray: Hello everyone!I'm Caspian Gray, a writer who focuses on deep, character-driven emotional dramas. I'm currently looking for trial readers for my new short drama, "Love of the Introvert."It's a story of...
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Shriya: It's a beautiful story with strong characters and a great story line. It's emotionally very engaging from start to finish. I enjoyed reading this.
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lblomme: I always love a story where good overcomes evil. The sad start, the growth, and ultimate strength of the main character was well done. The story never lagged and ultimately delivered a happy ending even for characters who were less than stellar. Well done!
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barb7604: Very good story, but glad you are writing a longer version. The end came way to quick without any of the previous drama
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