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I like the story because it is very touching at the beginning, especially for Mrs. Fluea and her son Elvan makes me curious.

"Mother and child conversations are very emotional, between acceptance, stubbornness, and request 🥹"

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Very bad writing, very weak characters

"Very bad writing, very weak characters"

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