Very enjoyable

"I have read the first three chapters and would like to read the rest when I get a chance. So far, it has been extremely enjoyable. The characters were understandable and well-developed. In many stories like this the girl character comes across as unfeeling and too strong, but Claire is a good protagonist. I loved the first chapter -- the writing itself was beautiful and really portrayed the character of "Oblivion". One thing: I think that it needed a little more description in places. At times, I had a hard time picturing the setting. This is a great beginning! Good luck in the contest!"