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Caught me off guard

"Not my usual genre, but I’ll admit — this pulled me in. The pacing works: slow burn, then a real payoff. Sarah’s not your typical virgin caricature; her awkwardness feels earned, not manufactured. And Tristan? Sure, he’s suspiciously perfect, but that’s the point. The author knows what she’s doing — planting doubts while letting the romance breathe. The final twist? I didn’t groan. I nodded. It’s smart structure, not cheap shock. Curious where part two takes this tension between trust and self-deception. Uneasy in the best way."

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Plot twist..lol

"Good writing.. can't believe the plot twist "

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