What is your opinion?
Sexy scenario and spicy dialogue
"I think @Kellythesub is just brilliant at creating sexy scenarios that involve exciting changes in dynamics. I love how the sexuality suddenly escalates between two friends in this story. The dialogue works really well too. Certain lines that @Kellythesub has the characters speak just puts them fully in their positions of control and vulnerability respectively. While the language and the action are not the most extreme, the heat comes from how certain lines subtly affect the dynamic. Anna is like a lion calmly stalking her prey. Jenny is the perfectly enticing prey. You can feel her nervous energy as she anticipates the moment when Anna will finally pounce. And claim her. Physically, and emotionally. "