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Great book

"Great book"

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Good story

"I binge-read this story in a few hours and I loved it. I'm not sure if I really liked the ending, but it kept my attention the whole time. I highly recommend it."

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Good ending

"Good read and I'm happy with the ending. Sick and tired with girls falling for their abusers. "

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A quick read

"Somewhat intense, good story, good ending! Wish there was more"

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Good storyline

"The ending was fing perfect! Loved this story!"

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Hear me out here

"Riveting from start to finish, great writing style, good storytelling and scene setting. Only wish it could have been longer 😁"

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Contradictions

"1st story I have no idea how to react. Definitely loved the ending, where after she realizes that she is not able to protect her Earth “family” she brakes and finishes the torment. I adore her strength and braveness to not submit. "

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I couldn't put it down!

"It’s rare to find a book that combines genuinely good writing with such compelling plot and hot sex. What really impressed me was the slow reveal of the heroine’s desperate situation both on Earth and on the Moon. The use of flashbacks and the gradual uncovering of information was chefs kiss. I really felt connected to her with every new chapter and my heart ached for everything she was going through. I'm looking forward to read more stories."

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Good so far!

"I like the story so far, wish there was more to read! Hope new chapters come soon! "

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Intense

"This book left me feeling so much. Though short it brought out a very intense story. Loved the way its written."

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Thats it?

"It was an interesting plot but the ending seemed rushed and open ended. "

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3 star

"The story was not that interesting and i felt the story moved to fast. "

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Hear Me

"Could use more explanations on background and history of what happened in the past a little more."

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