Civilization

"The way you have introduced to us the main character is good. I feel as if I was there with him as he woke and had his first sip of coffee. Looking at the computer telling what he has to worry about and what he decided to do here. Grabbing his cigarettes from the shelf where he is running to the car, and his tool kit to get into the accident climbing aboard the helocopter. Describing the wash from the turbine with the snow that is there. They are flying toward an accident. They are both concerned, the investigators at the scene are German. They want to see all the stuff that is there. The main character looks at the investigator and tells him, that he can not give him the telemetry of the car or what the telemetry has to tell them. You have been able to allow us to see his displeasure as they are talking with him. And also what they learn about the victim of the crash. How her body looks as if it shouldn't be that young, but there is a sense that she has been doing something to allow her look younger than what she is."