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Great

"This story has atmosphere to spare. The mood is established immediately and it never wavers. Reading it feels like being wrapped in something dark and beautiful and completely absorbing."

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When originality meets talent.

"I really enjoyed the book from the first page. It's an innovative concept, on a site that reuses the same literary styles consecutively. The plot is well-constructed and the pacing is just right, neither too slow nor too fast. It was a story that I really enjoyed reading, becoming a regular after-work read. I highly recommend it."

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Brilliant Debut

"An absolutely beautiful and action erupting beginning and a powerful ending. Truly, you’ve written your sci-fi debut story so well and carried it to its conclusion with a very natural flow. One becomes emotionally attached to the characters, and I can see that if this story comes out in a full novel form, it could become a masterpiece. Keep writing like this—I love your stories. ❤️"

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The last Human

"Liked the character s and plot."

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"This story is well-written. I haven’t read many war stories in English but you developed the story well. Character development is incredible as well. Descriptions are on point as well. Keep it up!❤️ "

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More Than a War Story

"I’m not usually drawn to war stories, but this one is very well written. That said, what truly captured me as I moved through the chapters wasn’t the war itself, but the development of the relationship between the two main characters. The alliance between machine and human also raises fascinating questions. I don’t yet know how it will end, though I do know what I would personally hope for. Still, I’d rather not make any guesses. It’s a great piece of writing — I’m looking forward to what comes next. ----- A quick addition after finishing the story. There was a moment when I literally held my head because I didn’t figure something out — something I probably could have. But I won’t reveal it here; everyone should discover it on their own (or not). In the final chapters, I felt the tension building more and more — it was all very well constructed. After getting completely caught up in the suspense, there was a point where I frowned and even felt a bit discouraged. But by the end... how should I put it... You gave us a truly beautiful story, dear @saherj. Congratulations."

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Love this writing style.

"I love the descriptive writing and the flow of the plot. The world building is rich and enthralling and the characters are intersting and unique. Great read so far! "

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A Compelling Story That Pulls You In From The Start

"Though only seven chapters in, The Last Human does an excellent job of creating suspense. The story moves at a slow pace, but each chapter ends on a note to keep you thinking what will happen next. Quite a few characters get introduced early on, but it's so in a way that has you curious to learn more about them. Noel is a main point of mystery. Matters of how she ended up spared yet captive on the robots side, and would a certain choice she made cause trouble for her when deciding to switch sides? These questions make an intriguing plot for someone not even heavy into the sci-fi genre. All the more impressive for the author's first sci-fi story! The grammar is good with a great use of vocabulary and visuals. Not too much to over explain, but still enough to create a vivid picture. For those into a story of mystery possible romance and future action battles, this is one worth looking into♥️"

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